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11月29日

beneath the sea ..

above the sky ..

within the eminence ..

i fly ..

spread my soul ..

look ahead ..

without lookin bak

with dreams i tread

past the storm

past the rain

past the fire

desistance i refrain

SLOW down

reach the desired

what i had dreamt

was never there ....

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	ikilledtheposers さんの投稿: wow dude.. fantastic poem man.! uve got talent for sure! evryone on this msn space thingy are soo talented! wish i was one of them... anway later!, Dirt 12 月 13 日
	Hellraiser-reborn さんの投稿: wicked poem bro...luved it 12 月 4 日
	Unforgettable_fire5 さんの投稿: i’ve been searching and talking to people. looking for what’s “right”. how do you answer some of these questions? i’m getting tired of so many of them.it’s draining. it’s not that we sit and think that everything can be like so. i’m not quite sure what it is. if it’s the road to accepting that ideals can’t be applied. that perfect images always have fine print at the bottom. we live our lives. we are aware. we see, and we know. we understand the core of it. but it’s never said outloud. the silence is what may be deafening us, making our ears ring. the silence is what is draining us. the ringing in our ears make us not hear clearly. it impacts our performance as listeners. this post of urs was very well put up prat :) liked it alot! A. 12 月 1 日
	§amm° さんの投稿: You write exceptionally well for someone of your age. Just keep it up. Regards -Sama 12 月 1 日
	The_Hawk さんの投稿: Mate you are a tough slave master - worse than my boss i say ;) 12 月 1 日
	0FrostedPinkRose0 さんの投稿: ok ok... got ya... SLOW !! my bad !! and dude wats up in ur head... a lil screwed up abt girls... wat is it ? ...havent come across the gud ones yet or is this ur MCP side speaking... either ways....not good !! that was ur dose for today ! buckle up get on right mind set... mwuahahahaha!!(this is a wicked laugh btw) 11 月 30 日
	Z000nie さんの投稿: I really liked the way you wrote the last 2 lines... "what I had dreamt... was neva there.." It happens... Kewl dude!! 11 月 30 日
	icyvolcano_5 さんの投稿: Perfect delusion! Hey Prateek this is good, real pscho sort of thing ! I read ur reference to REM band on Krit's space , wanted to correct there..and here Krit has corrected u..its a sleep state involving dreams.. I m developing love for poetry I guess..now only I have read this post 3-4 times to understand its deep essence. cheers icy P.S. Update is waiting up there for ur visit. 11 月 30 日
	She-Lucifer さんの投稿: Hey Prateek.......... THHHANNKK---UUUU SOOO MUCH..... both for wishing me and taking the pains of wishing me at 12:04 exactly ;))))) Thats was awesum.... ahem and as for ur space....ummm...i think....aaaa....hhmmmmm....... That it rocks dude...wat else!! Thanks agn.... Take Care Ciao! 11 月 30 日
	sweetiesbutterfly さんの投稿: Hi Prateek Thx for ur nice comment I like this entry . Very strong hee Can I add u as guest blogger Let me know if u want Sweeti 11 月 30 日
	magenta さんの投稿: that was beautiful...and so true..! 11 月 30 日
	0FrostedPinkRose0 さんの投稿: the only end to a dream is its fulfillment else it remains just a dream. and if it still a dream then you gotta keep up the chase... kinda going in a circle... delusion...dictionary told me it is something falsely believed/propogated.. thus what you found was not the truth.. not the dream. keep the torch in hand, head high, heart n soul spirited.... 11 月 30 日
	The_Hawk さんの投稿: >reach the desired >what i had dreamt >was never there .... Hates it when it happens. Nice poem btw. And an updated blog for ya mate. 11 月 30 日
	-X-road-er- さんの投稿: i ve kept ppl who haven't read the book in mind and written it... nothin much revealed...but its ur call :) 11 月 30 日
	-X-road-er- さんの投稿: u asked for it, u got it... an update! gee... i was confused when my songs were interrupted by another one... chked out the bottom n realised! 11 月 29 日
	archi_ya さんの投稿: heya~ gud write this is...great leap n a gud read..nyway..thanx for dropin n commentin on ma blog ....gud luck ~ 11 月 29 日
	saurabh_dhall さんの投稿: hey... dude d u have that song .."out of nothin at all" .. if yes then please email it to me by http://www.yousendit.com i just love that song... anyhow... well now i am writing a double meaningpunjabi story ... lets see if that work out... coz this one didnt.. :( ... lol ... chal c ya... see u arnd.. saurabh 11 月 29 日
	---__neha__--- さんの投稿: hey buddy this was really nice... :) me not updating cause i'v got my exams goin on.. will pacca update on the 1st okies :) take care! 11 月 29 日
	zegr8st さんの投稿: hmmmmmm nice man is all ill say... but...... wat u dream is ALWAYS there tho, if u don find it maybe u havent tried hard enough tc...... 11 月 29 日
	Sar-cas-tic さんの投稿: Deep thoughts there! Really liked this one. 11 月 29 日

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